Strong like any Banyan
Deep like that Ocean
Are beckoning his two stretched out arms
Rising her heart’s alarms
Surrendering right then and there
Love is all in the air
With foreheads meeting to rest
Heavy, with
thoughts best
Enchanting and magnetic is the moment
When into those arms she went
Life’s
agony flew off the vent
Life. An eternity of life, it
meant.
So it was him, her messenger
of love
And her heaven flew into her, like a feathery dove
And his stretched out arms
checked her in
Locked them up, breaths held and her raised chin
With a faint
smile, that was her ornament
They captivated that moment
With his enormously possessive
embrace
They feasted on that moment, face to
face.
While, the clock simply ticks on forever
That moment grows on him and her.
A Time
Life’s true Mime
And, twelve, struck the clock
…...she
fled, off her time lock
Into her
world of cinders
Ella, dreams yet of wonders.
Ahh! Everyone has a dream, but one's should not interfere others'. Nice poem :)
ReplyDeleteI admire critics for their view points. Well, this interference part sounds interesting. I did not notice it myself. Gr8 observation.
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DeleteNice composition. Amazing weave of words.
ReplyDeleteThey were supposed to be simple diction poem. The cause and the projection meant to me. Thanks.
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DeleteI loved your poem, it was a pleasure reading and when social message is taken up by writers thats more good, thanx for sharing!
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DeleteExcellent ,couldnt imagine better than this
ReplyDeleteGlad you think so.
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