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Thursday, August 25, 2011

As I waited

Sitting in a corner,
Like a loner,
I lay pondering over your thoughts,
You dint turn up after all my waits.


Expectations burnt inside me with glare,
Seldom for which do you care?
Vacant seats filled up with all couples,
The noise of all talks and many chuckles.


Time fled in silence yet,
No signs of you, but,
My eyeballs raced, door to the podium,
Awaiting a figure, if at all you come.


My heart wept, not eyes,
As I waited, For You.                                                              
                                                                                                         


Cheers,
Sush






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14 comments:

  1. Sh@sAugust 25, 2011 at 2:52 PM

    Lovely poem. Loved the pic. As I waited...sounds just fine.

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  2. Harish P IAugust 25, 2011 at 7:01 PM

    Nice one.... Waiting is painful and enjoyable at same time, isn't it?

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  3. AnonymousAugust 26, 2011 at 2:02 AM

    aww....

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  4. chitraAugust 26, 2011 at 2:30 AM

    nice...

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  5. Jay at The Depp EffectAugust 26, 2011 at 5:15 AM

    I have so many thoughts, depending on how I interpret the poem. The first thing I thought of on reading it was the picture of the labrador lying under the flag-draped coffin on his military master at his funeral, and thinking this way, I'd say simply 'Grief'.

    But for a broader interpretation, I can't do better than F Scott Fitzgerald's book title: 'Beloved Infidel'.

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  6. magiceyeAugust 26, 2011 at 7:59 PM

    beautifully done

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  7. Anu LalAugust 26, 2011 at 10:24 PM

    Just WOW!"Time fled in silence"....superb imagination..

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  8. AnonymousAugust 27, 2011 at 8:01 AM

    so poignant!

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  9. Anil SawanAugust 28, 2011 at 1:09 AM

    quite emotional Sushma! Wish the lady see the expected figure coming.. soon enough :)

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  10. Ashwini SaneAugust 28, 2011 at 7:17 AM

    Hey Sush, am glad you are writing poems again! Nice one. The caption is at times not important, but 'As I waited ..' is fine. or you can try The Lady in Waiting maybe ? Whatever, its your poem and your blog! Keep writing!

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  11. Seeker of EquanimityAugust 29, 2011 at 2:56 AM

    the longing and the wait for your beloved. nicely put up.

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  12. SaiAugust 29, 2011 at 7:18 AM

    Very well written...

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  13. Sunil PadiyarAugust 30, 2011 at 3:51 AM

    Nice :)

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  14. Kiran @ KiranTarun.comAugust 30, 2011 at 7:48 AM

    Sweet poem :)

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